I've been reading about in your blog, and I've found mistakes in your language here and there making it hard to understand your posts. I don't claim that I'm perfect in the use of English (as English is also my second language) but I can point out a few mistakes that you used repeatedly (and makes reading considerably harder):
1.The overuse of continuous verb (or perhaps the lack of "to be"): I've seen sentences like this: ...First, when I connecting some places where cont. tense is a better choice, this doesn't hurt readability as much as the cont. tense problem though, and the mistake in this area is much less often and hurt readability less.
3.Verb transformation (the rules for adding -ing to certain verbs, etc): This is usually not a problem, but in your writing, I've seen a particularly bad case: ...Chinese can not marring until 22 years...
我一直在阅读你的博客，同时发现你的文章中存在着各种各样的语法错误，这导致你的文章很难被阅读和理解。我并非英语专家（英语也是我的第二语言），但却可以纠正一些你常出现的错误（这些错误严重影响阅读）。
1、过度的持续动词（或者缺乏"to be"）：我已经看到了这样的句子： ...First, when I connecting some places where cont...。此时用tense是一个更好的选择，cont在此处较不常见且会难以理解。
3、动词变（the rules for adding -ing to certain verbs, etc）：这通常是没有问题，但在你的文章中，我看到了一个特别坏的情况： ...Chinese can not marring until 22 years...
Thank you for writing about, and including pictures of this beautiful place. Fascinating to know about how it was formed. If I were there, it is a place I would enjoy visiting. Eileen
谢谢你关于这个美丽的地方的文章，包括照片。我想知道它是怎么形成的。如果我去中国，很想去看一看。艾琳
Someone sent me an email directing me to this post on your blog. It's probably because I just wrote a post on the same subject, but happening in the Middle East. I am a third-grade teacher (of eight-year-olds) at an American School in the Middle East. My post is about a girl with a serious problem in that there is a boy who has loved her since they were three, but she does NOT love him! My post is about her problem, and what I did to help her. It's called "One Girl's Problem - Stalked Since Nursery School".
I've looked at your blog and found it very interesting. I've actually been looking for an interesting blog out of China. I attempted to sign up for your RSS feed, and there seems to be a problem. When I try to add it, I keep getting the message: "RSS feed cannot be found". But at any rate, I've linked it to my own blog, so I can find it again, and I also think my own readers will be interested in your blog. Thank you for writing on this interesting and timely topic. Best regards, Eileen
有人给我发了一份电子邮件推荐你的博客。可能是因为我写了个关于同一主题的文章，但故事发生在美国中东部。我是一名美国中东部学校三年级的老师（8岁）。我的文章是关于一个女孩被一名男孩喜爱的困扰，但她不爱他！我的文章是关于她的问题和我所提供的帮助。文章标题为"One Girl's Problem - Stalked Since Nursery School"。
我查看了你的博客，并发现它非常有趣。我实际上一直在寻找一个有趣的博客来了解中国。我试图订阅你的RSS，但似乎出现了问题。当我尝试添加它，我不断收到讯息："RSS feed cannot be found"。但无论如何，我已经在自己的博客添加了你的链接，这样我就可以找到它了，我想我的读者也同样会喜欢你的博客。感谢你撰写这一有趣和及时的话题。此致，Eileen
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